Reflect on my presentation.

Before I go in front of whole class, I thought I was going to do really good on my presentation. But as soon as I face my audience, I suddenly got nervous and rushed through all the presentation and end up short on it ( I think I am the shortest through out the whole class).

Still I think I did good on pointing out my topic(thesis), and support it with examples I have. As Rikki said, I need to get more examples!!

I'm considering to make my thesis stronger, so readers can get it right at the thesis.

Identify a section from Blogging

The fact that people unknown to one another could now read the same text allowed for a new kind of impersonal connection between people (40). This part of sentence really came to me. Who would thought about we can talk about game all over the world? It does not directly relate to my essay but I think it does relate some how (maybe relates to everyone in our class). Blog is just fascinating way to communicate each other and we can communicate on every different topic we want. Maybe this sentence is to general to tell that it relates to my essay still I like this sentence from book.

What changes do you intend to make to your essay based on feedback in the writing conference

I better change my essay better by show my analysis of my topic which is all the gamers like to talk about what they want. First of all I better make my thesis more outstanding. I just glad I'm on the topic though, I was worrying that I might not understanding the topic well. I think I start off pretty in good shape, but still I have to move around or change those histories I have in beginning of the paper. The history about blog and game push my analysis of thesis too much. I had hard time finding examples because I support my thesis with just atmosphere of article and blog, need to fine confident examples on the paper.

Basically I'm intend to make
1. my thesis better
2. arrange my order of paper(contents)
3. better exmaples    

Quote from Blogging

Kottke explained that he was asking regular readers to become 'micropatrons' of the site by contributing a small donation (Rettberg 136). So Kottke is basically going around in blog asking readers to learn the ways of micropatrons by creating small donation. Actually it was the great idea, but it was risky because he has to quit his job and tried a brand new exercise which was never done before. It was obvious that he could not get‘big’ patrons from ‘big’ sponsors Furthermore, micopatrons shows plenty of ‘micro’ are totally able to turn in to ‘mega’. One little thing can turns into something bigger than previous one. His challenge was hazardous but affective same time. It shows internet, especially blog in this case, can be transforms to something more than just social chatting or sharing thought space. He even has to quit his job to keep up his blog going. There is more than just one possibility for everything, we just need to look around little bit more.

My interest is ....

I have many interests, music, art, basketball etc., but I think the thing I most interest in is video or pc games. I play games all the time and lately the newest game, StarCraft II, caught my attention. I just love it ! There is StarCraft I which I played about 8 years, it never get old. To get the information to get information about things I'm interested, I'd like to study on personal and topical blogs.

"Who am I ? as a writer...."

While I am writing, I usually think of people who are going to read my paper and I just write the chunk and fix it from the very beginning.

If I have to create the brand new story (or any writing work) I really shouldn't do something like that. I am excellent person who can create story with the background that has been already set up but creating something out of nothing, I can't do that.

I don't like writing since I can't write well....
I'd love it if I can write better, but it's hard to me.
Well... I can try again!